People sleep less now than before and I think that it is because of several problems like technologic, T.V, internet or our lifestyle.
On the one hand technology is very harmful because the human body will be on alert if we use technology before sleeping and there are a lot of people who do it.
On the other hand I think that people now have got another lifestyle, now life is quick and we haven’t got time to rest, It make because of upsets us when we need more time to sleep. Although we need eight hours’ sleep, we sleep less.
Another reason is caffeine, our society drinks a lot of coffee and it is bad. Specialists recommend one or two coffees per day but many people drink a lot of more than one or two coffees.
In conclusion, I think that humans should change some of these things to sleep more.
ERIC PONS PONS
Eric, you can do it better than this. The topic is good but the conclusion is too short and I don't understand the pros of that.
ReplyDeleteI think your idea is good, but the conclusion is too short, although the text you use any connector worked in class, so I'll give you a 6.5!
ReplyDeleteDiego Atienza Florit
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if i were you i would make the conclusion more long and the central opinion less long.
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