Nowadays, most people think that teachers should have more authority to improve education; but others think that they shouldn’t because we wouldn’t have freedom.
On the one hand, people who are in favor, think that if teachers had more authority, students would have a better behaviour and they would listen more in class; as a result, they would have a higher educational level. In addition, children would be more controlled and they couldn’t use cribs.
On the other hand, some parents think that their children wouldn’t have so much freedom because teachers would be too hard and, if they had more authority, they could get to abuse them. Consequently, the students who were in these schools would have a closed thought; they should learn other rules.
I think that some teachers should be stricter with some of the students; especially with students who have a bad behaviour so they can modify it. And if they were stricter, students would have better performance.
Raquel Haro 2n BTX A
I agree with you raquel! I think you've made a good essay!
ReplyDeleteRaquel :D
ReplyDeleteI think your composition is a bit short, but well done! the structure is correct.
I also think that it's better for us if teachers were stricter! because as we are all students and we have experience in this topic, we can give our opinion. I always learn more when a teacher is strict, because he or she makes you study harder and the behavior of students with a strict teacher is better than those who don't have a strict one.
Teachers should be stricter if it is a good way to help them and improve their level. Teacher shouldn’t be stricter if it is not worth it. (Eli’s comment)
ReplyDeleteIn my opinion, I think that teachers should be people who teach their subjects, not people dictators.
ReplyDeleteTeachers should support students to continue studying instead of being more aware of their lives outside the classroom