Television has both pros and cons, this is an entertainment for most of the world population. Television is the information instantly.Watching television is considered as one of the top recreational activities in the world. Viewers can watch TV programs and films.
On the one hand Television has got a lot of pros. This is the most quickly way to send information. Population can receive important messages and aspects of actually at the moment. It can also be very educational for viewers. There are a lot of educative programs how National Geographic, kitchen programs, programs to quotidian use, etc. Another aspect in favour of television is that is the cheapest way to transmit information. Most busines use television to promote their products across publicity.
On the other hand the cons of television, it can promove the violence with inapropiatte programs. The television is not censured, a lot of kids can watch any programs that they shouldn't see. TV programs can lead to adiction, as well as a lot of healthy problems and psycology disorders.
MARC ROVELLADA 2n BTX B
MARC ROVELLADA 2n BTX B
Hi Marc, I agree with your pros and contras of the television. In my opinion I am a supporter of television, but I don't know what do you think, there isn't the conclusion.
ReplyDeleteMarc, your essay is quite good but you should have added your own conclusion about the issue.
ReplyDeleteMarc, the for and against of television are good and you have estructured well the composition. But there isn't the conclusion of the topic.
ReplyDeleteMarc, despite the lack of vocabulary, your essay is good.
ReplyDeleteMoreover, to get a better structure, if I were you I would write a conclusion and use more conectors (Mandi likes conectors jaajaj)
It could be better, but you did it well.
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