Abortion in Spain has been legalized since 2009. While some people agree with this law, others disagree.
On the one hand, people who are against abortion, say that aborting means murdering, because you are killing a baby; a person who can’t decide whether to live or not. They think that people should be more responsible, that they ought to think more before acting, so that this wouldn’t happen.
On the other hand, people who are in favour of it, say that if the abortion takes place early, the baby isn’t formed yet, so, it doesn’t mean any murder at all. They also say that abortions are safe medical procedures, as less than 0.5% risk of serious complications, and that women should have the right to control their own body.
I think that aborting isn’t a good solution, because, as it is legalized, some people can see it as a normal thing and don’t care about it in the way they should. However, as I see it, there are some circumstances when you can justify it. For example, if you know that the baby is going to suffer from a serious illness, like degenerative or deadly ones, or if the woman has got pregnant involuntarily, because not aborting in these cases, would mean further psychological harm.
Paula Seguí Llull 2nd Batx A
I think you have chosen a current topic, so people can easily debate it. On purpose, I'm for the abortion
ReplyDeleteI think that the composition is very well structured, I am according to Paula's opinion about abortion! Well done!
ReplyDeleteon the one hand I want to say that I like the arguments you've written! they are really convincing! I haven't got a radical position about "abortion", I think that it depends on the situation.
ReplyDeleteon the other hand, I don't want to be critic, but I have to say that I think the introduction is too short ( my introductions are usually too long, they are the opposite pole!)you should write one or two lines more. but in general
I like your theme and I agree with it
ReplyDeleteI think that the structure is very good and I'am agree with Paula's opinion.
ReplyDeleteI'm agree with your opinion Paula. Abortion shouldn't be an ordinary thing in a woman's life because it means killing a baby.
ReplyDeletePaula, I like your composition. But i haven't go a radical position.
ReplyDeletegood job!
I did not place or for or against a party because I think I can do at this point where you do not know what you do and because you know that the baby may suffer and otherwise I think it's wrong because these killing.
ReplyDeletepaula I disagree with you, choosing to become mothers or not should be completely free, without exception.
ReplyDeleteIn addition especially if we are talking about the first weeks of fetal life, and we can not yet speak of life even in concrete.
I really liked your essay. I give an 8.5