According to some people, it's thought that driving after having drunk some glasses of an alcoholic drink doesn't hurt anybody, whereas others think that having drunk a drop must be considered as a sin, and immediately punished. There are many ways to talk about this, but let's see the opinion of those who are for and those who are against.
Firstly,for those who are for drinking and driving, that's because they think that they know how much they have to drink before driving a car and not to crash. Therefore, they can make rounds of drinking: if you go with some friends to a party, all of them drink but one of them doesn't, and that person drives. Besides, they won't accept going to a party and not drinking a single drop of anything.
Secondly, for those who are against drinking and driving, that's because they think that it doesn't matter how much alcohol you drink, a few glasses can make you lose your concentration on the road. Besides, you won't die if you don't drink at a party, you'll just be bored earlier. What's more, you don't have to go to a party every time you want to have fun, there are many ways to have fun.
In my opinion, I am completely against drinking and driving. As I explained above, no matter how much you drink, drinking alcohol and driving is completely incompatible. And I don't need to go to a party to have fun; simply with some videogames I am much better than many people in a party.
Aitor Sintes Galindo, 2º BTX A
It's quite good, I really like it as you use expressions and it's fluent. Good job!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Aitor! drinking and driving can't go together! Good structure and good use of connectors!
ReplyDeleteI like your composition Aitor. I think many people should take public transportation instead of driving!
ReplyDeleteI'm agree with you, Aitor, drinking and driving is very dangerous although people don't care much about it. I think you should change the conectors of the second and third paragraph and put "on the one hand" and "in the other hand" to contrast more the ideas. Althoug this, I think the topic is very right to debat
ReplyDeleteI am also against drinking and driving. And when a person drinks and then drives his car and carries people. This has to be aware that leads to more people.
ReplyDeleteI'am agree with you, there are others solutions instead of driving under alcohol effects
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Aitor, You can go to a party or to a disco, but If you want to drive you won't drink anything. Like you had said drinking and driving are not compatible.
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