At present most people are obsessed with what they look like. Some people see themselves well, whereas others don't therefore this obsesion becomes something important in their lives.
In my opinion nowadays people are too obsessewith being liked by other persons. They spend a long time in the gym to get fit. I think that It is important to be fit but only to feel good with yourself. This can be a problem when you stard taking tablets or other substances to develop more muscles, or to lose weight. Alhough It is bad not to worry about your phisical appearance.
In conclusion, in general, in my society there are more people look after their bodies. People nowadays spend a lot of money to get a beautiful body, which gives them a lot of satisfaction.
Diego Atienza Florit 2n Batx C
Very good Diego!It's a good writing. I agree with you in most of your views <3
ReplyDeleteYes, I agree with Pol, but I think you should have used more connectors or proved your rich vocabulary. Despite this fact, I'm for your arguments as many people tend to worry about their appearance too much. Well done!
ReplyDeleteHi Diego, I agree with your arguments, I think It's good to be proud of your body and have an healthy life. But without an obsession, you know.
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