I think these people don’t sleep enough because the modern society doesn’t let them. People work too much because they need to earn more money in order to pay their huge houses, electrical appliances, clothes and other purchases, new and expensive cars... They have lots of things to do and little time, therefore, they hurry up in excessive way, so they are stressed, they need more time and they reduce their hours of sleep. Nevertheless, if they don’t sleep, their abilities diminish, health can be harmed and they work in a bad way. Consequently, people also drink much coffee and the caffeine can also damage their health.
I believe that in some cases this lifestyle can be bad and harmful to us. Society advances and we must advance with society too, but we must do this cautiously.
Natàlia Mercadal 2n BTX A
Good opinion essay. Well structured and good use of the connectors. I think you deserve an eight.
ReplyDeleteYes, I'm agree! Moreover, if teachers took out our "concentrats" exams (and put a ten for everyone), we wouldn't be stressed!
ReplyDeleteI agree with you Natalia! and I think that sleeping well is a very important thing!
ReplyDeleteI think what you say it's true. Increasingly, people sleep less and that is a problem, but there is no other choice!
ReplyDeleteI'm totally agree with you. Workers and students need to sleep!!! If not, we can't work efficiently, you're completely right
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