It has been said that humanity has had a negative effect on our world because of the obsession with our weight. The causes of this obsession may end in eating disorders, like anorexia or bulimia. As far as I’m concerned, not everyone is equally affected; although people who have eating disorders, have a problematic disease.
On the one hand, you only have to look at the sizes which are sold in shops; there aren’t any big sizes. And people who are fat, they can’t dress as they want to because they don’t find anything for them. Moreover, the shop-window mannequins affect our society because that people think that they need to wear a size 34 to be normal. Consequently, they begin to obsess about their weight.
On the other hand, I think that shops should sell big sizes so that people wouldn’t be obsessed with their weight and they could have a normal life. But, the problem is that if shops sell big sizes, people don’t worry and they begin to be fat.
In conclusion, I believe that people should eat a balanced diet and do a lot of exercise; to be normal. Therefore, I think that shops should sell up to size 46.
Raquel Haro Lendínez
2n Batx. A
Hello Paula! I agree with you! We shouldn't be obsessed with our appearance. Well, I think you had a good opinion essay.Congratulations!
ReplyDeleteHi Raquel! I agree with you!
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Well done, I think like paula you give many arguments and that's good, well done!
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