Saturday, 14 May 2011

DOMESTIC VIOLENCE

Domestic violence is present in a lot of houses  . The actual news only show us sex violence. This kind of violence is in fashion but the violence which is not mentioned is the violence towards the children living in these houses but  the problem is that it isn’t considered dangerous.
   In the first place ,the latter is considered right to educate these children. It can be used to   punish  bad behavior. Discipline is needed and  a great number of young people don´t know this. Consequently, the majority of parents choose the physical punishment to discipline them. Another reason is the nervousness which can be caused simply when a child is shouting , crying or  playing in the wrong moment ,then the parents hit him angrily. Besides they use this violence to be respected. For this reason in some schools physical punishment is allowed.
     On the other hand, the reasons mentioned above are insufficient to accept that violence. Sometimes the homes where the child is hit, there might be more violence apart from that . As a result children only learn violence and they don’t improve their behavior .This violence could be bad in their future  because they may use the violence they have learnt or they can be afraid of anything, anyone or any situation . Nevertheless the most important argument against this violence is that children are persons than old people and  a lot of cases  of this insignificant punishment hide a beating which have done at home.

   In my opinion to use physical punishment is not necessary to  be respected, you can get it  with  good words but  I believe that  a little blow is good to correct  a bad behavior. Although people usually use it too much such excessive that this little blow has turned into real violence.  I think  that to keep them without going out or without  their favorite game is much better than corporal punishment . I disagree with the permission of the government which allows schools  to practice this violence , in my view  at school they teach you knowledge  and attitude but the children’s behavior must be learnt at home.
Paula Gomila 2n A btx

1 comment:

  1. Amazing Paula, I like your arguments and also your opinion. The best way to solve problems is talking. It's awful to resort to violence when you have problems.

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